Thursday 29 January 2015

Imprisoned

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Prisoner of thoughts,
a mind-set that rots,
confined and trapped
by  beliefs strapped.
Unable to spill out
of fear and doubt,
secured by locks
the iron gate mocks
at my helplessness
clueless restlessness.
An eternal wait
for a turn of fate,
a saviour with a key
to set me free.
I kept waiting
hoping, berating
the confining lock
a mere mental block,
I worried without pause
about a lock that never was.

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6 comments:

  1. Ankita 30 January 2015 at 00:29

    thats an amazingly penned poem with deep words that describes mental barriers. Loved the ebb and the flow of this :)

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    1. Unknown30 January 2015 at 11:16

      Thank you! Yes mental barriers are difficult to over come as we rarely realize their presence..

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  2. Manish Purohit30 January 2015 at 09:31

    very nice...especially loved the last two lines - "I worried without pause, about a lock that never was". . indeed sums up all!!

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  3. SRS30 January 2015 at 17:24

    That was beautiful....felt like I was reading my own mind

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