Thursday, 22 January 2015

Unspoken

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When I say I am glad to meet you
and share a handshake too
I often do wonder
what I really want to say.

When I say I feel desired
by your heart so admired
I often do wonder
how I really want to feel.


When I join you everywhere
like a cute little teddy bear
I often do wonder
what I really want to do.


When I seem so flattered
by words that hardly mattered
I often do wonder
what I really want to hear.


When from my memory I fish
out your most favourite wish
I often do wonder
what I really want to remember?


When my love for you wanes
like the dryness when it rains
I often do wonder
what is it I really want to say?



This post is written for the Wordy Wednesday prompt “What is it that I really want to say?”  by Blog-A-Rhythm:
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24 comments:

  1. Tomichan Matheikal22 January 2015 at 11:23

    Love needs no words.

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  2. Tomichan Matheikal22 January 2015 at 11:23

    Love needs no words.

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  3. Where do you want to go today?22 January 2015 at 12:07

    I think you have taken the seed of "words" and grown them into a full conversation of communication. Like a bouquet of flowers.
    Words, being only 10% of communication, must rely on actions (doing), and feelings for energy to transmit the message. When the words are heard, they again are changed to feelings which trigger doing.
    we have two tongues,
    one in your mouth
    and one in your shoe.
    Which one will you listen to?

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  4. elly stornebrink22 January 2015 at 13:05

    Actions speak louder than words and hopefully they will inspire and instill a love ... ;) <3

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    1. Unknown22 January 2015 at 22:51

      True, mere words many sound good for a while, but unless it reflects in our actions, their charm dies out :)

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  5. Francene Stanley22 January 2015 at 15:10

    You describe someone not wholly giving themselves to each situation. Well done.

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    1. Unknown22 January 2015 at 22:53

      Exactly! There are so many unspoken things, we keep them to ourselves for fear of uncomfortable/awkward situations..

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  6. Vinitha22 January 2015 at 16:16

    Beautifully penned Vidya. Loved it. :)

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  7. Unknown22 January 2015 at 16:50

    Love this thought provoking poem and the gentle rhyme. It's so true that often we aren't being authentic to ourselves and others, making us question what it is we really think or feel. Well done.

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    1. Unknown22 January 2015 at 22:56

      Thank you Cathy :) Yes, we wear fake smiles at times, speak things we don't really mean and leave many things unspoken...

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  8. Varsha22 January 2015 at 17:04

    Beautifully written!

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  9. Maniparna22 January 2015 at 17:27

    Such heartfelt words Vidya..wonderful!

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  10. Penelope Potty Snooper22 January 2015 at 20:07

    really heartfelt

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  11. Shilpa Gupte22 January 2015 at 22:21

    Very sweet!

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  12. Suzy23 January 2015 at 12:29

    Seeds of doubts or flustered in love. Either way it's nicely done.

    Dropping by from the Wordy Wednesday linkup

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  13. Beloo Mehra24 January 2015 at 12:02

    Lovely poem, like the repetitive quality, though each sentiment expresses the truth little differently making the whole experience richer and deeper. Very nicely done!

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  14. MeenalSonal28 January 2015 at 21:03

    Lovely rhythm and rhyme :)

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