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With hope in her heart, she climbed uphill to the temple
that had given her solace for two long years after her daughter went
missing at that very place. Walking past the familiar sights of beggars lined up
along the path and hawkers selling idols, trinkets and flowers that people gave
as their offering to please their deity, her eyes resumed their quest for one
particular face.
A tiny girl with a tear stained face in tattered clothes
walked up to her and tugged at her sari, pleading for alms. Normally she never
paid heed the dirty creatures and their calls, but not today.
P.S- This is my first attempt at Five Sentence Fiction.
This piece of five sentence fiction is written for the topic 'Offering' at
Lillie McFerrin Writes.
Participating in the Ultimate Blog Challenge.
Also linking to : http://www.writetribe.com/write-tribe-pro-blogger-challenge/
I like your five sentence section. Please write some more to share with us.
ReplyDeleteThank you :) sure, I liked the whole idea of packing much in a few lines :)
DeleteNicely done..so many things conveyed with so little words. Liked it :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, I'm glad I took the plunge into FSF !
DeleteBrilliant first attempt, Vidya! The story is a parent's worst nightmare come true.
ReplyDeleteThanks Aathira, coming from one of the fiction queens, it means a lot...very encouraging :)
DeleteTouching and beautiful, Vidya.
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinitha :)
DeleteBrilliant start...way to go indeed. Keep your good work on..
ReplyDeleteP.S.: I also today for the first time attempted FSF :)
Thanks Manish! Loved yours too :) Good luck!
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