The word worms that crawl out of me!
Love needs no words.
I think you have taken the seed of "words" and grown them into a full conversation of communication. Like a bouquet of flowers.Words, being only 10% of communication, must rely on actions (doing), and feelings for energy to transmit the message. When the words are heard, they again are changed to feelings which trigger doing.we have two tongues,one in your mouthand one in your shoe.Which one will you listen to?
Actions speak louder than words and hopefully they will inspire and instill a love ... ;) <3
True, mere words many sound good for a while, but unless it reflects in our actions, their charm dies out :)
You describe someone not wholly giving themselves to each situation. Well done.
Exactly! There are so many unspoken things, we keep them to ourselves for fear of uncomfortable/awkward situations..
Beautifully penned Vidya. Loved it. :)
Thank You Vinitha :)
Love this thought provoking poem and the gentle rhyme. It's so true that often we aren't being authentic to ourselves and others, making us question what it is we really think or feel. Well done.
Thank you Cathy :) Yes, we wear fake smiles at times, speak things we don't really mean and leave many things unspoken...
Thank you :)
Such heartfelt words Vidya..wonderful!
Thank you so much :)
Thank you Shilpa :)
Seeds of doubts or flustered in love. Either way it's nicely done. Dropping by from the Wordy Wednesday linkup
Thank you, may be a bit of both :)
Lovely poem, like the repetitive quality, though each sentiment expresses the truth little differently making the whole experience richer and deeper. Very nicely done!
Lovely rhythm and rhyme :)